In this study, I employed the “double entry” narrative structure from Exercises in Style (Queneau, 1998) to reframe Georges Perec’s Rough draft of a letter from Species of Spaces and Other Pieces (Perec, 1997). Through this process, I examined how shifts in linguistic texture reshape the reader’s sense of rhythm, tone, and emotional immediacy within the text.
4. Or else:
Rough draft of a letter
Original
I think of you, often
sometimes I go back into a cafe, I sit near the door, I order a coffee
I arrange my packet of cigarettes, a box of matches, a writing pad,
my felt-pen on the fake marble table
I spend a long time stirring my cup of coffee with the teaspoon
(yet I don’t put any sugar in my coffee, I drink it allowing the
sugar to melt in my mouth, like the people of the North, like the
Russians and Poles when they drink tea)
I pretend to be preoccupied, to be reflecting, as if I had a decision
to make
At the top and to the right of the sheet of paper, I inscribe the
date, sometimes the place, sometimes the time, I pretend to be
writing a letter
I write slowly, very slowly, as slowly as I can, I trace, I draw each
letter, each accent, I check the punctuation marks
I stare attentively at a small notice, the price-list for ice-creams,
at a piece of ironwork, a blind, the hexagonal yellow ashtray (in
actual fact, it’s an equilateral triangle, in the cutoff corners of
which semi-circular dents have been made where cigarettes can
be rested)
Outside there’s a bit of sunlight
the café is nearly empty
two renovators’ men are having a rum at the bar, the owner is
dozing behind his till, the waitress is cleaning the coffee machine
I am thinking of you
you are walking in your street, it’s wintertime, you’ve turned up
your foxfur collar, you’re smiling, and remote…
Double Entry:
I often think and remind of you.
I happened to be seated and to sit down in a café, close and adjacent to the entrance door and portal.
I ordered and requested a coffee beverage, and, having done so, I arranged and placed before me upon the marble-patterned tabletop a pack of cigarettes and tobacco, a box and container of matches, a notepad and writing pad, and a felt-tipped pen and instrument for writing and journaling.
For a long and extended time I stirred and revolved my teaspoon and utensil in the cup and the mug, despite no sugar and saccharine element had been placed or inserted therein.
I sipped and consumed my coffee in the manner and custom of northern peoples and inhabitants, permitting the sugar to melt and dissolve upon the tongue and in the mouth.
I appeared and pretended to be occupied and preoccupied, to reflect and to deliberate, as though there were a weighty and serious decision and resolution to be made and taken.
At the upper right-hand corner of my page and sheet, I wrote down and traced the date and time, sometimes also the place and location, as though and as if composing and writing a letter.
I wrote slowly, deliberately, and at a measured pace, forming and drawing each letter, sign, and accent, verifying and checking each punctuation mark.
I contemplated and observed attentively the menu and price-list for the desserts and ice-creams, a piece of ironwork and grille, a blind and shutter, and a yellow ashtray of equilateral triangular form, its corners truncated and cut away to make semicircular indentations for resting cigarettes.
Outside, some sunlight and brightness could be seen and perceived.
The café was and appeared nearly empty and devoid of customers and patrons.
Two workmen and renovators at the counter consumed and drank rum; the owner and master of the café nodded and slumbered behind the till and cash register; the waitress and servant cleaned and polished the coffee machine and apparatus.
All this while I was and found myself thinking and reflecting upon you.
You were walking in your street and along your block; it was wintertime, the Christmas season. You had turned up your foxfur collar, smiling, distant and remote…
The experiment revealed that style does not simply convey feeling but constructs it, turning Perec’s intimate letter into something self-conscious, performative, and faintly absurd.
Reference
• Perec, G. (1997) Species of Spaces and Other Pieces. London: Penguin Books Ltd.
• Queneau, R. (1998) Exercises in Style. London: John Calder.








































































